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starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-12-16 12:00 PM


She died for love
A love she couldn't persue
He knew not of such love
so what was he supposed to do?

She never spoke to him
nor glanced his way
but still, he was to be her prince
coming to save the day

But there was no prince
no horse to save her,
Such love for him
even her death could not waver



© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-16 12:20 PM


So sad, yet beautiful.  Welcome back again Starboards  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 1999-12-16 01:32 AM


I agree, sad and beautiful. The things one does for love...
starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
3 posted 1999-12-16 11:34 AM


Isis-- Thanks...i love being back...although i'm not really sad anymore so i dont have much to write about...but i'll try  

Danni-- Thanks...I'm so glad that a talented poet like yourself chose to read my poem...thanks again!

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-12-16 12:05 PM


Just beautiful Starboards  

Jenny Lee


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 1999-12-16 01:10 PM


Wonderful my friend!

How sad that there are those who will not know the love that we feel for them. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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