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Isis
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since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-12-15 08:22 PM

I enjoyed part 1 so much thought I'd do another..

Dracul looked down at his beloved Mina his Elizabetta,
'Yes! I tell you that without you,'
'Without the love you give me,'
'I am dead, dead to all humanity.'

Dracula stroked her her,
The smoothness of her shoulders,
He murmed, 'You are my love, my life always...'
Gently he turned her body exposing her neck and shoulders.

Mina moaned and felt a small pain,
As he entered her veins
The pain intensified and at the same time,
Turned into a pleasure, blurred ecstasy....

Mina heard the voice of her beloved,
'And we shall be one flesh,'
'Flesh of my flesh.'
'Blood of my blood.'

He used his thumbnail,
And opened a wound on his chest,
The blood flowed freely,
Not human, but dead, dead black blood dribbled down his chest.

'Drink and join me in eternal life.' he said.
She drank his blood and came near fainting,
As the power of her true love's life flowed into her,
Each drop of his blood now tainting.

Tainting and ruining her for eternity,
'No!' he said, 'I cannot let this be!'
Mina cried out, 'Take me away from all this death!'
And bent her head again drinking from he.

'No! I am cursed to walk in the shadow of eternal death,'
'I don't want that for you.'
'I love you too much too condemn you!' was his cry,
'And I love you....' Mina replied as she pressed her lips to her lover's chest,'I too shall die...'

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What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 12-15-1999).]

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 1999-12-16 12:08 PM

Wow sis...I am not sure what to say. Powerful words and vision in these.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-12-16 12:22 PM

That'll do Maz, thankx

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

3 posted 1999-12-16 01:35 AM

So intriguing! I just love this!

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

4 posted 1999-12-16 12:11 PM

Wonderful Isis

Jenny

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 1999-12-16 01:04 PM

Isis,
I am indeed in awe of these words. . . the love that knows no boundaries. . . not even death. . . you have done well, my friend. . .

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Bathory
Junior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 11
OH.

6 posted 1999-12-16 03:27 PM

great poem! But Dracul was Dracula's father
If you are talking Vlad tepes.(Vlad Dracula)

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

7 posted 1999-12-16 08:06 PM

Blessed be one and all and thankx

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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