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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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0 posted 1999-12-15 05:56 PM


Moments of strength,
Moments of weakness,
Moments of joy,
Moments of weepiness.

So many emotional moments,
Many different moments lived,
Look back on your life,
Which has visited you the most?

You try so hard to be brave and true,
To fill your life with purposeful moments,
Then some seemingly innocent little thing,
Changes course and moments.

The fight is hard,
We all weaken 'tis true,
Thought I'd found a light,
Thought I'd found it in you.

But as usual the light blinked,
Twas shining for someone else,
Now all I have is moments,
Spent longing for you.



 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
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Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-12-15 06:59 PM


Beautiful Moments Isis....
Verse four says alot for me.....

Jenny


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



Isis
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2 posted 1999-12-15 07:07 PM


Thanks Jen, that is the verse for me too  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


danni
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since 1999-11-20
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3 posted 1999-12-16 01:10 AM


To look back on the moments that I have lived, I would have to say the weeping moments are the ones that come visiting all too often. I share the hurt and disappointment portrayed in this piece Isis.
starboards
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4 posted 1999-12-16 11:47 AM


Isis-- great poem! Moments are all we have sometimes, but they can be better than the real thing...
Sven
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5 posted 1999-12-16 02:34 PM


Beautiful Isis. . .

Moments make up a life. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Isis
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6 posted 1999-12-16 08:12 PM


Why thanks everyone  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Michael
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7 posted 1999-12-17 05:11 PM


Beautiful work, Isis,
Sometimes we only see what we want to see, and the opening of eyes to the truth can be dreadful.  Good job.

Michael

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