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JOY 14
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0 posted 1999-12-15 03:17 PM


Give me the dance of the happy
Swirling and twirling around
Laughing with rythm to the beat in the step
Give me the dance of the happy

Give me the dance of the morose
Sadness made present with every move
A hand twisting arm comming slowly down
Like eternity passing
Give me the dance of the morose

Give me the dance of the furious
Wild pounding of feet upon the pavement
Anger penetrating through every limb
Give me the dance of the furious

Give me the dance of the emotions
That go through human kind every day
That shudder the soul and feed the hungry heart
Give me the dance of the emotions




 JOY


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1 posted 1999-12-15 04:40 PM


Wonderful Joy!

Such beautiful words. . . love is a lot like a dance isn't it?  But sometimes, the steps can be a little hard to learn. . .

Very nice. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-15 05:48 PM


Oh Joy, this is wonderful a beautiful dance we have every day of our lives, the days we don't you feel like something is missing...
Bravo this was inspired  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-12-15 07:13 PM


Enjoyed the read very much Joy...
The last line nailed the entire piece!!!!


Jenny Lee  


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 1999-12-16 01:15 AM


Wonderful poem Joy. I think we all have had these dances with life. It can be so tiring and invigorating at the same time.
starboards
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since 1999-10-14
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longwood, florida
5 posted 1999-12-16 11:45 AM


I think that sometimes life should leave out sadness and angryness but only encorporate them when they teach lessions to us...its just my thoughts, btw great poem!
JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
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Wisconsin USA
6 posted 1999-12-20 06:10 PM


Thank you so much for your nice replies!  

 JOY


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