Dark Poetry #1 |
Annoyance Confusion |
wolfie97 Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58Newcastle, WY USA |
Darkness engulfs my rancid dreams While putrid and vile thoughts Escape my endless day dreams. Confused by reality and sleep They both intertwine With identical annoyance. I cannot escape through Bars which I have errected. Time drags on inside my cell. Energy is spent, Motivation forgot. With no one to give me reason. No reason to trust No reason to not Therefore I am confused With no where to go, Not even a place to hide For I am always here Reminding myself of my past. Will this erruption Of sickness for everything Subside for thoughts In which I barely remember? Or, shall I loose, Both life and death compleatly Sucking me in. Sclice open inspiration, and bleed the beauty of art from within. ==Garrett-'sneaky'-Gall== |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I could relate to this poem. No motivation, no trust, no where to hide. JOY |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
This was a great read. I could connect with all of it. The fourth stanza hit me the hardest. It is a feeling that haunts me constantly. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This eruption like others will pass,.... then your world will fill anew, this time with love and happines We gotta hope! What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow Wolfie....awesome words here... I like very much.... Fantastic read Jenny Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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wolfie97 Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58Newcastle, WY USA |
Thank you for your replies. I guess that sometimes, it takes time to get enough ambition to even worry about what you forgot was wrong. Sclice open inspiration, and bleed the beauty of art from within. ==Garrett-'sneaky'-Gall== |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I too can relate to this poem...no where to go, no one to turn to...great poem! Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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