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wolfie97
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-12-14 09:55 PM





It's been so long
Give me time to remember.
How could I forget this song?
You've given me raging fire, not
a dying ember.

When times of tribulation
Cross the path of my desolation,
This world of communication
Calms my rage and despiration.

Thank you dark passions.
I am appreciative in all respect.
Though, time, given in rations
Still, I need darkness to reflect

So, I'm back to read and write.
Giving as much as I shall take.
I shall join this mortal fight,
And just our words are at stake.

Through wonders of witts
We shall understand eachother.
Reading and writing that fits
May express one to another.


  Sclice open inspiration, and bleed the beauty of art from within. ==Garrett-'sneaky'-Gall==



© Copyright 1999 wolfie97 - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-14 11:26 PM


Wolfie, Our dark forum means so much to all of us in many ways.  Friendships made, lessons learnt, contact whatever.  We are all greatful for it my friend.
And I'm grateful you wrote this poem to remind us all  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 1999-12-15 11:58 AM


Wolfie97, such nice things you say.
I look forward to your giving and
hope you enjoy what you take!    

Sven
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Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 1999-12-15 02:50 PM


Thank you for sharing my friend. . . I can only hope that we can give you as much as you have given us. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-12-15 07:54 PM


Verse two is awesome.....
So glad your here at Passions......


Jenny Lee




 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
5 posted 1999-12-16 11:51 AM


Wolfie--
   Sometimes i wish that i didnt have to return to dark passions so much (not because i dont like you guys) but because i want so much to be happy, but something inside of me brings me here still, so i'm glad that you guys are here for everyone and myself!

JD
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61
N Prov
6 posted 1999-12-17 10:12 PM


Good writeing. Keep it up


 Every thing Dies

FreeByrd
Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

7 posted 1999-12-22 08:49 AM


Wonderfully put wolf. A real nice read too.  

-RS

 There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
8 posted 1999-12-23 09:17 PM


And Walter, Dark Passions thanks you for all your wonderful contributions, as do I.

Michael

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