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Dark Poetry #1

The World is a Strnge Place

JD
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 61
N Prov

0 posted 1999-12-14 04:58 PM

The World is a Strnge Place

The world is a strange place some say
but I myself seem to find it more normal
than the world I live in The World of the Dead
Wile I live in darkness you people live in light
this is my main resion why I do not like the liveing they bother me with there happy ways insted of there sad depressed haunted ways of the life on earth so choise you words and ways in life or you will pay for them in death so I do....

By JD writen for the dead liveing like me and my dead love Jessica.

Every thing Dies

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-12-14 05:57 PM

Indeed JD> The world is a strange and lonely place. Living in darkness it always will be. If you don't have joys in your life you are the living dead, and I wouldn't wish that on anyone.

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 1999-12-15 01:39 AM

This is such a powerful poem. But my dear JD, please, PLEASE, don't take offense. But I can't imagine that your dead love would be happy if you live your life this way. I have lost some people close to me who were much too young to die and I understand what a painful process it is to go through. And that it is one that will never end. But I can't believe that those who have passed would want to see us just give up on life. They are in a better place now. I believe God has brought them home for a reason. And we will all meet again someday.
I hope I haven't offended you in any way. I just hate to see someone so full of hurt and pain. I've seen to much of it in my young life. I hope your days will once again find the light.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-12-15 08:10 PM

I understand your pain all too well.
You have expressed your hurt beautifully.

Jenny Lee

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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