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Sven
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0 posted 1999-12-14 03:21 PM


I hold your heart in my hands
     bruised, worn, and broken
blasted by time's sands. . .

I take your soul softly and gently
     lost, wounded, and hardened
it's voice crying, "Save me"

Let my words heal your heart
     Let my voice renew your soul
Your fears will fly away like leaves. . .
          And your life will seem anew
All this I do. . .
                  . . . only for you.

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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Isis
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1 posted 1999-12-14 05:43 PM


Oh my God Sven this is so beautiful my friend
*tear*.  It's not merely a poem but a creation!!  Bravo, take your bow  


 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


danni
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wisconsin
2 posted 1999-12-15 01:09 AM


Words such as these could renew the most hardened soul and heal the most badly broken heart. Lovely poem Sven.
wolfie97
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3 posted 1999-12-15 01:40 PM


very sweet poem, I really like it. Tuggs at my heart strings.
Sven
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4 posted 1999-12-15 02:40 PM


Thank you my friends. . . your words are very wonderful and encouraging. . .

Isis, I will only take a bow if you join me. . .

Danni, I hope that they will heal a heart. . .

Wolfie, I have been known to tug many a string. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Isis
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5 posted 1999-12-15 05:28 PM


I can't my friend......

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JennyLee
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6 posted 1999-12-15 07:58 PM


Beautiful...beautiful...beautiful!!!


Jenny Lee


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



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