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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-12-13 11:20 PM

'Oh yes my love you have found me.'
'Mina my most precious life..'
Mina awoke with a shock,
This was no dream but evil and strife.

She weakened quickly,
Her love for him was too strong,
'I have wanted this to happen.'
'I know now that I want to be with you always..'

The presence of her prince,
Her lover of the darkness,
He whispered, 'Command me to and I shall leave thee.'
In her heart she felt his love, it's sharpness.

'Will you command me to go?'
'No I cannot, I was so afraid I'd never feel your touch again.'
'But you are no mere man?'
He placed her hand on his heart as would a friend.

Mina couldn't feel it's beating,
'There is no life in this body, can you bear it?'
'I am lifeless, soulless. I am hated and feared.'
'I am the monster man would kill to end it'.

Mina was shocked, her soul tortured even,
She then fell against him helplessly,
'May God forgive me , but I love you, I do!'
She spoke the words so passionately.

They finally made love humanly,
She whispered softly,
'No one must ever come between us,'
'I want to be what you are,'
'See what you see,'
'Love what you love...'

'Mina if you are to walk with me,
You must die to your breathing life and
be reborn to mine.' said Dracul,
'Yes.' she whispered willing to do anything
to be with her love.......

FOR AZRAEL

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 12-13-1999).]

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

1 posted 1999-12-14 02:23 AM

Such a dark and enchanting tale. I liked this alot.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 1999-12-14 08:18 AM

Beautiful words from the Daughter of Mystery. . . the ultimate sacrifice for love of another. . . the purest death. . .

Isis, this is INSPIRED!! I will have to read it again and again. . .

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-12-14 02:26 PM

Wonderful, wonderful tale, Isis.

Michael

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-12-14 05:39 PM

Not my wonderful tale I'm afraid. I adapted it from Bram Stoker's Dracula. I adore that part in the movie and book

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

5 posted 1999-12-14 10:29 PM

Thanks ISIS though as you can see the name I havent gotten around to changing yet but am about to.
A nice poem and nice story again I thank thee much dear lady.

If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

6 posted 1999-12-15 07:38 PM

So glad you wrote this.....

Jenny

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

7 posted 1999-12-15 08:06 PM

Jenny thankx why so glad, you've got me curious? Hope you come back and answer this!!

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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