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dvlishimp
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since 1999-08-01
Posts 126
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0 posted 1999-12-13 07:35 PM



Love
Friendship


[This message has been edited by dvlishimp (edited 01-09-2000).]

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JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-12-13 08:44 PM


Wow...full of venom
What do you have to offer me?
Good line  
Written so very well.

Jenny Lee


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-13 10:26 PM


Not venom, thinking, thinking of the future, you can't live from love alone, you need housing, family, food, stuff for children.  Glad to see you are aware of that.  It's a cold reality we DO have to think of more than love, there is life in general too.

Loved this well done  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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