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dvlishimp
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since 1999-08-01
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0 posted 1999-12-13 07:33 PM


nothing.

[This message has been edited by dvlishimp (edited 01-09-2000).]

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JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-12-13 08:50 PM


I think that's all any of us wants...is to be happy.

I adore short verse that says so much...Well Done!!!!


Jennifer

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-13 10:38 PM


True words my friend, the choice is theirs and theirs alone in the end.  Ringing with truth.  The endless pursuits of happiness  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-12-13 11:31 PM


One need not alway accept what the hand of fate has dealt them. We must all learn to turn misfortune to advantage, become alchemists of the soul.

Nothing?
I understand the fear of not having or being, but I can always fill with rage. You are a vessel that chooses what is to fill it.
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 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
                                            DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
                        (Marquis de Sade)



[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 12-13-1999).]

danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 1999-12-14 03:13 AM


This short poem does say alot, and says it well. But I have to agree with DE on this. We can't control what we are dealt. But, what we take away from it is completely up to us. You can eighther look at it as a lesson learned and use it to your advantage. Or you can just give in and let it defeat you. But anyway, this was a very good piece.  
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