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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 1999-12-13 03:19 PM


Hate
Is such a strong word
Stinging in the soul
Meaning it at the moment
Later wondering if it really was...
Hate
Is such a powerful word
Ringing like longful bells
Said to inflict hurt
Later, it's brought onto yourself.
Hate
Is such a word
Hastily said and recieved
Because hate that isn't true
Isn't hate at all.
Just a misplaced word.



 JOY


© Copyright 1999 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-12-13 08:14 PM


Loved every word.
Hate is such a powerful and draining emotion.
Well Done

Jenny Lee


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 1999-12-14 02:16 AM


i agree. hate is a very powerful and controlling emotion. this is a great description of it.
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-12-14 02:45 PM


My personally belief is you cannot hate what you did not first love, or where youe were not first hurt.  I believe love to be natural emotion, and hate to be manufactured, deriving from misplaced, lesser emotion, therein, I wonder can "Hate" ever really be true?


Michael

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 12-14-1999).]

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-12-14 06:14 PM


Great poem  
Michael, good theory.
Myself, I say hating kills the hater inch by inch.
I try never to hate, I may get really ticked off but not hateful.
Wonderful theory to explore..  


 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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