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Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 1999-12-12 07:17 PM


I feel sadness move through my body
I feel depresion, confusion
I reach to be understood
By the one I love
I look at my life and wonder why
I keep living through it all
I wish the pain would leave
But you learn to live with it
I hope to find a day where
I have pain no longer
Hope is all I can do

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)


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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-12 07:20 PM


Oh Neala!  So sad for you hon  
But hope isn't all you can do, keep your mind busy, write more poems!!   Go for walks somewhere you love, music always calms the soul too.  HUGS hope your feeling a bit brighter soon  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


~Red~
Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 36
chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a.
2 posted 1999-12-12 11:40 PM


oh my lord in heaven! i feel like this right now...and lemme tell ya...tis not a fun feeling...but ya gotta cheer up, babes! btw good poem! can't wait for more!

 ~Why is it that you beleive in perfection my friend? For perfection is a dream, it shall never be acheived. So tell me why you beleive in perfection?....For PErfection doesn't exist..~

Rachel_A
Member
since 1999-11-30
Posts 70
North Webster, IN USA
3 posted 1999-12-13 09:49 PM


I also am feeling like this right now.  And it is the worst feeling in the world.  Especially when it is caused by no one but yourself, which is the case with me.     I hope you feel better soon.
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