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Another day |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Another day dawned this morning, One cold and grey, Reminds me of myself, Our sunshine has gone away. You make sure you share the misery, Start the day with hurt, Is that blood I see? The blood of victims on your shirt? Dictator extrodianre' Who's day will you ruin today? Steal their sunshine too, Take their laughter away. You are the only one who's suffered? My friend you don't even know the meaning, Moments, days, weeks and months, My pain is contstant never weakening. I close my eyes, to get away, Find a better place, Abounding with love, peace and happiness, Where I can't see your face. You can't come there, You are not wanted there, Tis only for the true of heart, Once again you set yourself apart. So like the day is dismal, The world with you is too, Tomorrow the sun will shine, And perhaps my soul can too. The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Isis-I know exactly what you are speaking of. I have been there too. We must always hold onto that beautiful thing called hope.  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Danni, believe me I hang onto hope!! Never without it! What the inner voice says will NOTdisappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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~Red~ Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 36chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a. |
I know how you feel...i've been there i think...but anyways...good poem,..i liked it lotts! ~Why is it that you beleive in perfection my friend? For perfection is a dream, it shall never be acheived. So tell me why you beleive in perfection?....For PErfection doesn't exist..~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Red What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow Isis. . . you have really opened yourself up. . . this is excellent. . . takes an "I dare you" approach. . . takes a stand. . . good!! Good!! Keep it coming. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Beutiful poem as is the writer. but Many times have I felt like this day you so describe and well the sun does come out sometimes though I prefer the rain and bleekness as does my girl. but thats off the poem subjec, im odd I know If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Sven and SD, you are not odd SD different seasons, different reasons is all I understand you my friend What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Is it truly possible for anyone to understand me. damn Im doin it again ohwell I gues it is possible woohoo Im a changed man in some waysIf all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautiful Warrior Princess... Verse 4 is my favorite jennifer Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Almost missed this one, which would have been a sin. Isis... your strength is showing. I Love it. -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I'm so glad to call you my big sis isis! Wow...looks as if you did another outstanding job writing...thanks for always being there for me! Ashley "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Isis, you shine every day. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You are all sweeties!! Thankx What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Niemczak Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51 |
Perfection!!!!!! |
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Andrew New Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 9 |
Isis, I wish I could be that fluid with words ,but alas I`m not. You say about starting the day with pain, but pain is a two way street. Try discussing why the day has started that way.Remember, It takes two to tango. |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
You feel like I feel at times.Sometimes I just wish the day could be over.Everyone has bad days so just wait for tomorrow. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Isis, I only wish that I could write poetry as unique and well written as you. I relate to the entire poem. However, verse 4 is my favourite and is exactly how I feel. * Melissa Honeybee * |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Melissa I'm no expert by any means. Glad you liked it though Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas.. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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