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crayon New Member
since 1999-12-10
Posts 7singapore |
illusions and hallucinations nothing more than mere imaginations nightmare landscapes the imagination failing ever to reach life's conclusion and still the questions they haunt me echoing down the corridors of the never sleep elusive shadows looms around around around remainders of promises that were never keep unwelcome faces phantoom in the solitude creeping chanting broke the reverie once thought you would be the salvation learnt the hard rule of trust no one but me ---and maybe all i have now is a dream, a wish perhaps...could it be possible? to search not knowing what you are looking for? to seek for what is not and perhaps never will be there? i don't know...after all, i never did... |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
i enjoyed that and feel your frustration. looking for something your not sure what it looks like....keep up the good work. |
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medusa Junior Member
since 1999-12-09
Posts 23 |
A powerful piece! congratulations |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Keep searching, it's well worth the ride. Nice work -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Tis a great piece. Trust is hard to come by but soon ye shall find the trust that ye deserves If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to the DarK Forum. Wonderful piece full of life's questions. Keep searching you shall find your niche my friend  What the inner voice says will NOTdisappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sometimes, what we're looking for is right in front of us. . . keep searching my friend, you will find it. . . Welcome. .. That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Just had to read this one again. It's been on my mind and pulled me back. This is a keeper. Hope someday you find that one other person who deserves your trust. -RS |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
life can be confusing and you have shown this in your poem, yes WELCOME!!! I hope you will post somemore of your poems  Ashley "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
Welcome  Such moving words.--A Little Fairy-- |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Excellent verse, Crayon, I certainly hope to see more from you here. Welcome to Dark Passions. Michael |
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