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candace
Junior Member

since 1999-09-05

Posts 14
los angeles, california

0 posted 1999-12-10 07:54 PM

Stormy notes of sweet sorrow
strolling through the night

Roaring tension of the tides
dancing all around

We looked at one another
with questions unanswered

Never once listening
never a thought in our minds

Our hearts were dancing as one

Cliffs above us
water below

Unable to tell the difference
we jumped

Now falling,falling as one
nothing else matters

For we are in love

Unable to control
Love is like the wind

Still falling, falling as one

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-12-10 08:05 PM

There is beauty in everything, even sadness and death. Lovely

The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-12-11 05:58 AM

Love can certainly have that effect on people. Good job.

michael

medusa
Junior Member

since 1999-12-09

Posts 23

3 posted 1999-12-12 04:06 AM

wow! that si all i can say!!!!! when i read this piece i thought of Rodin's lovers in the louvre !!!!! that was great!

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

4 posted 1999-12-12 09:00 AM

I really love reading poems that seem to literally take you to and put you in the scene described. This one did that. Nice work.

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

5 posted 1999-12-22 10:25 AM

One of the best descriptions of love I've ever read. Devoid of all the external stuff.
Only the pure feelings of what Love is.
You have a way Candace. This is a beautiful piece.

-RS

Fairy Colours
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 169
Sunrise,Fl,US

6 posted 1999-12-22 11:44 AM

Beautiful poem. Yup. I hear ya Mike.

--A Little Fairy--

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 1999-12-22 12:23 PM

Very good. . . so much in so few words. . . the essence of it all. . .

Wonderful words candace. . .

"falling as one. . . "

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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