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danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin

0 posted 1999-12-10 01:37 AM


He comes to me
in midnight dreams
in answer to
my silent cries

He holds me close
inviting forth
the tears
I've fought to hide

He waits for me
to release the pain
I've held inside

Through this all
I can't help
but wonder
why he came

I hear him whisper
to my soul
he's come to take
the pain away

I feel his kiss
upon my cheek
as the tears begin
to fall to like rain

And with each moment
and tear that falls
lonliness
begins to fade

Yet I feel
the sadness linger
Beacause he cannot stay

For with the night
he must leave
in the dawning
of the day


© Copyright 1999 Dannielle - All Rights Reserved
lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 1999-12-10 09:55 AM


Wow, I like this one! I visualize this one for sure. Excellent dan!!
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 1999-12-10 11:06 AM


I know that there are angels sent to heal the broken-hearted. . . you have spoken of one of them. . .

Very beautiful. . . continue to sing my friend. ..

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa
3 posted 1999-12-10 12:55 PM


danni, you weren't kidding about this going with the one that i wrote were you, our hearts must have been on the same plane. this was truely wonderful. a sacred kinship.
mo.

danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 1999-12-10 02:25 PM


Thank you lostboy and Sven. Your comments are something I look forward to.  

Mo- I hoping you might enjoy that. I would agree, our hearts were definately on the same plane. That just kind of made my night.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-12-10 07:19 PM


Danni it seems to me it's your guardian angel who comforts you.  You are priveledged to feel or dream his prescence.
We are never truly alone.  This was a lovely peice my friend  


 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
6 posted 1999-12-11 05:49 AM


Wow, this was simply beautiful Danni.  Reminded me of dreams I used to have of an "angel" in white whose soul purpose seemed to be comforting me.  Mine turned out to be real, I hope yours does too.  

michael

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