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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-12-09 06:03 PM



For John


Indeed I journey through the darkness,
Striving towards the light,
But the journey is long and hazardous,
We'll need our courage and might.

I hope that you will join me,
In this the final quest,
We have others who may join us,
They too want only the best.

We will battle demons,
We will lose some along the way,
But with courage and hope,
Our hearts will lead the way.

The secret is simple,
To strive, to love, to hope, and dream,
And we all will make it eventually,
We're on the winning team.

So to all the lost souls,
The trek it will soon begin,
Hoping you will join us,
For we won't stop until we win!!





 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
1 posted 1999-12-09 06:10 PM


I like that a lot. When i read that it like u wrote down my soul.
-Neala
(Goddesses of Sadness)

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-09 08:02 PM


Neala, it's what we all want.  Join us on the journey.  If this spoke to you it's because we all have that hunger within us.  Wanna come for the ride?  



 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
3 posted 1999-12-09 08:29 PM


Everyone is on a journey these days for spiritual fulfillment I hope you find what you seek.

 If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
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Toledo Ohio USA
4 posted 1999-12-09 11:09 PM


I will also joinm this crusade to find this "Utopia" where even my beliefs and ideals can be accepted as with everyone elses.

 If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 1999-12-09 11:13 PM


I have to say this was very well done! Uplifting and you will win!  Glad to see what you look like finally!
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
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6 posted 1999-12-09 11:59 PM


A wonderful poem, I see much hope in this.

Michael

Isis
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7 posted 1999-12-10 12:23 PM


Thanks SD Glad you will join us  
Thanks WhtDove we will all win this way
Thanks Michael, hope, I have plenty of  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-12-10 01:20 AM


I like the positiveness to this one. Almost too uplifting for dark   Nicely written Isis.
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
9 posted 1999-12-10 08:17 AM


Add me to your list Isis....
Good to see you...and Dylan is adorable.He looks like he keeps you busy..eh?!  
Great poem....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



Sven
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10 posted 1999-12-10 11:10 AM


Going to make me come out from behind my mask Isis?  Well, I really don't mind. . . thank you for your words. . . they really spoke to my heart. . . I strive for them every day. . . I think that if we all come together, we can find a way out of the darkness and into the light. . . but never forgetting that there will always be others. . .

My friends, thank you for joining us. . .

Sven/John

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa
11 posted 1999-12-10 12:51 PM


very inspirational, now my dear isis, lets go, lead follow or get the ---- out of the way, i'm ready.
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
12 posted 1999-12-10 01:30 PM


Yet in the midst of the darkness we forget there is light. Thankyou for showing me the way to this my sister. This is a difficult time of year for me and I needed the kick in the pants. Please continue kickin until the new year has begun.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
13 posted 1999-12-10 05:23 PM


Pack lightly the journey of a lifetime is about to begin.  So glad you all are joining us      

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas
14 posted 1999-12-10 05:57 PM


Wonderful verse!     I would love to take that trek with you and the others...just let me a moment to pack some rations.  

Alicat  

 As I sit here dimly thinking
Watching modem lights a-blinking
Churning out poetic hash.
Lord, in all Your piety,
Help me keep my sanity:
Please don't let the modem crash! --Alicat


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
15 posted 1999-12-10 07:04 PM


OK Alicat, we won't leave without ya  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


seti@home
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since 1999-11-28
Posts 24

16 posted 1999-12-10 07:58 PM


I can relate to this

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