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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
drifting on the current of the wind, into the echoes of the night. my voice softly beckons to you, to join me for the night. come and lay in my arms, let me hold and cradle you. in tender embrace, under a sky of velvet blue. cry your tender mercies, on my shoulder on which you lean. i will comfort, soothe, and ease your pain, your tears i will slowly wean. cry no more my precious love, you need never have a fear. for i will hold you ever, and my voice you will always hear. me. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
A beautiful and lilting love decree... You are forever the romantic heart... I always enjoy reading your work  Jennifer Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Your heart dances so naturally your poetry does too!! Beautiful Mojar The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Hate to ask but are you speaking to yourself in this poem for the final word me gave me this impression. Either way this is a nice heartfull poem If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
isis as always when i see your comments it really does me proud, i value your opinion greatly, thanks mo. jenny you have read and commented on all of my work, and just by your comments you are one person i would like to meet. thank you. suicidal sorry: that is just my signature, the way i sign them all. but thanks for reading. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You're welcome Mo! What you don't want to meet me though  Kinda hard anyways, I live Down Under!!! The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Beautiful as ever. It's kinda funny I wrote a poem that would go with this quite well a few nights ago but never posted. I didn't think it was very good but I just might have to so you can see what I mean. It's called Midnight Dreams.  |
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