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Sven
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0 posted 1999-12-09 12:38 PM


Isis asked me to write a poem based on a line that I included in a response to a poem that she wrote.  This is that poem. . . thank you Isis for all that you do, you do make a difference, not only to us, but to everyone in your life. . .

Daughter of mystery
You have walked among us in the dark
You have seen the despair of our hearts
You have known the pain of lost love

But now, you have found the path
That leads to the light.
You have found your way out of the dark.
But yet, you remain with us.
Your light a beacon of love
In a world where love is lost.

Daughter of mystery,
Knower of love,
Teach us your secrets
Show your light to our hearts.
Give us the strength to battle the demons.
Help us to find our way out of the dark
That we may join you in the light
To love yet again,
To escape this darkest of nights.
And to others, be as you are. . .

A parent of the light. . .a child of the dark.

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



© Copyright 1999 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
summer
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since 1999-11-23
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long beach .ca.usa
1 posted 1999-12-09 02:07 PM


i thought this was so beautiful.im so thankfull for this forum and the people in it.may we all follow in her same light.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-09 05:13 PM


Sven my friend, that was absolutely beautiful, I'm so touched.  It means so much to me, I doubt you really have  any idea how much.  Thanks so much, it's beautiful, and of course I'm gonna print it out!!  ((HUGS))    

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
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Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-12-09 05:18 PM


Very elegant piece  

Jenny


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Michael
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4 posted 1999-12-09 10:34 PM


A wonderful job you did with this challenge, Sven.


Michael

danni
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wisconsin
5 posted 1999-12-10 01:02 AM


What an incredible tribute. Isis should be proud to be thought of so highly. Sven , you did a beautiful job on pointing out what she means to this forum and the poets here.
I loved it and agree with everything you said of her.    

Sven
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6 posted 1999-12-10 11:00 AM


Thank you all. . . and thank you most of all Isis. . . you have helped me in more ways than you can imagine. . . and to all of you here. . . sing out!  Hide not your pain, for only by singing, can you see the sun again. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Marilyn
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7 posted 1999-12-11 12:09 PM


You have found a true friend here Sven. She is the sister of my soul. You said it all in this piece. Wonderful tribute!
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