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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-12-09 10:21 AM



I see her eyes
Golden in the dawn
Reflecting my love
In beautiful bronze

I see her soul
Golden perfect
Better than I
Plate of gods

I see her
In the night
Moonlight
Crystal face

She sees me
Emptey in a
crowd of one
Heart is gone

Prince of lies
Powerless sun
master player
Invisble games

Red and blood
Shows my eyes
I fell in love
with her crystal smile

Two as One
Her and Him
All is quite
In a great din

I am here
I am there
Oh but She,
She is everywhere




 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-12-09 05:15 PM


I liked this very much Walter....
It reminds me of someone I once knew  
The Master Player.....
I enjoy the directness of your pieces  

Jenny Lee
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 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 12-09-1999).]

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-09 05:33 PM


Wistful/haunting feelings here.  This was lovely Walter.. Do you ever write duds ??  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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