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medusa
Junior Member

since 1999-12-09

Posts 23

0 posted 1999-12-09 07:12 AM

Silence shrouds my soul as you stare at me. Your eyes those dark brown eyes that stare back have no end, a void where i melt for the need of your love.i could drown in those eyes of yours.yet you are cold your immaculate face cupped by your magnificent eyes and soft lips do not hold the tender look of love . you walk away from me yet our sight touches so close they embrace as our physical selves stay distant. Time stands still for me as you walk away, numb towards the love i have for you.i do not exist to you, so i shall only pray just to be able to see you as i hold my love for you in the silence......... ''i love you''

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 1999-12-09 08:27 AM

This is absolutely beautiful in its darkness. But Medusa, look away from the mirror, for I feel that you may be caught in your own gaze. Look inside yourself, there you will find the light that shines inside of you. . .

Welcome to Dark Passions my friend. . .

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

2 posted 1999-12-09 08:42 AM

Great piece

Brilliant first poem

Hope to read more

Walter Poe

Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

summer
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa

3 posted 1999-12-09 02:20 PM

i really enjoyed this one..i feel your every emotion in this...i have learned our poems are vents to help us deal with this life lesson of patients.keep up the good work.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-12-09 03:43 PM

Wow, this piece is magnificent in itself. Captures the heart, yet rendered in sadness, beautifully done.

Michael

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 1999-12-09 05:46 PM

I'll go with Michael on this one, magnificent indeed, and welcome to the Dark Forum

The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

6 posted 1999-12-09 09:52 PM

Must agree with the rest hear trully trully a great and magnificant piece of work hear, and I must say welcome to thee I hope your stay hear is long and happy. And you post many many more.

If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

medusa
Junior Member

since 1999-12-09

Posts 23

7 posted 1999-12-10 01:11 AM

Thanks everyone !!!!!!!! it is an honor to be amongst such talented artists of the english language!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 1999-12-10 08:04 AM

Brilliant!!!Medusa I felt your every emotion. Enjoyed the read.

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

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