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mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-12-09 12:10 PM



how can we alone find one another,
when we don't know where to look.
spending lives, and sometimes more,
and never really finding each other at all.

to live an eternity without ever knowing,
what lies ahead of us, trying to forget the past.
gazing toward new horizons, with renewed spirit,
only to come back to reality to see that the past overshadows the future.

hand in hand past and future walk,
unbeknownst in which direction they are going.
forward or backward, to or fro,
where does it lead us in our quest to find one another.

do we drift further apart, or closer together,
do we drown in our own sea of agony at what was, or is or will be.
we found each other once, and we shall find each other again,
but did we really ever lose each other, or just close our eyes for a while.

me.

© Copyright 1999 mojar - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-09 06:29 AM


Hope you didn't lose each other, that you indeed just closed your eyes for a while.  It is so easy to do.  This was lovely Mojar  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-12-09 05:31 PM


The last stanza was awesome...

I aslo love....do we drown in our own sea of agony at what was, or is or will be....

Jennifer  


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-12-09 10:30 PM


Hopefully it was just for awhile.  Sadly sweet, as always, Mojar.  

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 12-09-1999).]

mojar
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa
4 posted 1999-12-09 10:52 PM


isis, jenny, and michael, i sometimes feel belittled by some of the work created by the three of you, and for you to comment the way you do really uplifts myself and i sure others as well.  thank you so much.
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