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candace
Junior Member
since 1999-09-05
Posts 14
los angeles, california

0 posted 1999-12-08 09:26 PM


Memories of tomorrow
sing through the night

Moments of sadness
slip beneath the unknowing

CLUELESS TO LIFE'S PATH

A little breeze whistling
in one's ear, never hearing
never truly feeling, what is
really happening within

Striving for one's attention
looking for something not there

NEVER KNOWING TO LOOK WITHIN

For the deepest view in one's
eye, tells a thousand truths
amongst one's soul



[This message has been edited by candace (edited 12-08-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 candace - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-08 10:58 PM


Welcome Candace  

A lovely poem and yes all secrets and wisdom lie within!!  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 1999-12-09 03:17 PM


Look within
To find what matters
Look in through the soul
And find what's true

Very good.  I also welcome you Candace.

 JOY


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-12-09 03:21 PM


Wow, great piece, candace.  The ending says SO much.  Welcome, indeed.

Michael

danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 1999-12-10 01:40 AM


i agree with the others. this is a very nice reflective piece. Welcome!  
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