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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
Hey you over there in the corner..Did you know you have my name written all over you.No? well thats not a suprise, see I know things about you no one else could know.Ive been somewhere with you no one else has gone. But I know its hard for you to remember me just yet.I see you staring at me from the corner of your eye, I remind you of someone, maybe a long lost love you only kissed once but long to again.I can tell by the way you walk its you.Your just as passionate as me and a little more than I remembered.I know your favorite wine and your perfect setting. Its right before the sun hits the ocean and the sky turns deep orange when everyone has a matte glow to them. Do you remember me yet? Ive spent so many nights with you in this same scene.Except tonight is different.No more waking up suddenly or crying yourself back to sleep because what you thought was real was only a dream.Somehow someway we made it to the other side, here, now, together. Oh GOD is this real.I guess what they say is true. Some dreams really do come true. |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
What a beatiful story...Brought a smile to my face Carman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Me too! I'll go with Armanca on this one  The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Summer, I've read this many times. I absolutely love it. You've gone to the other side. I've written about coming from the other side back here. Both very interesting subjects. There's a lot more out there than we know about. Keep up the good work ,I'll be looking for the next one. -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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medusa Junior Member
since 1999-12-09
Posts 23 |
absolutely!!! loved it!!!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful, summer, and yes - some dreams do come true. Michael |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Very good Summer. . . dream on. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Great piece Summer... Dreams can and do often come true... Well Done... Enjoyed the read Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Summer... wow! words would just be a great injustice to the story so i will refrain from using them... starboards |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
I like the way you word your thoughts JD Every thing Dies |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice summer. I lived in Long Beach for almost thirty years. James |
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