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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-12-07 10:42 PM


Many years past the teeth sunk in,
Leaving they're mark upon my neck,
Draining that which gave me life.

Returned to life without a life,
I searched the dank morbid streets,
For that which was stolen from me.

But know matter how hard the search,
I am always left so empty and hungry,
For what I find quickly dissipates.

Searching now for the original,
I look for the first vampyre,
I search to drink of his blood.

His blood will make the hunger leave,
His blood will make me all powerful,
His blood will make me god.



 If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-07 10:45 PM


You've been bitten by the change bug haven't you SD?  Go check my response in Q and A.  Hon I am here if you want or need to vent or talk ok?  Great poem by the way, I love vampires too!!  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
2 posted 1999-12-07 10:58 PM


Oh yes bitten indefinately.
I have never written about vampyres here before though because of one tiny problem I couldnt for personal reasons.


 If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-12-07 11:11 PM


You are a man of mystery at the moment.  My offer stands hon, if you need to talk to someone way out of things.. you know where I am.  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
4 posted 1999-12-07 11:14 PM


Thanks IIS I will take you up on your offer but for now I must leave the internet.
But Am usually on icq arpond 8:00pm till 11:00pm


 If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-12-08 09:00 AM


I enjoyed this piece immensely Dear Tom.
I liked this Vampire  
.....His blood will make me God !! Cool....

Jen


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
6 posted 1999-12-09 10:10 PM


Thank you Jenny and just to let you know im still searching for this elusive Vampyre.

 If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

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