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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-12-06 10:45 PM



For a time I was not heard of.
For a time all was silent.
But I am reborn once again to be heard of.

For a time they say the pheonix dies.
For a time my ideas were dead.
But I have returned like the pheonix's rise.

For a time I was being reborn.
For a time we were rising.
But now we are to never be torn.

For a time I was being reborn.
For a time we were rising.
But now we have both been reborn.


 life is short kill quick


© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-06 11:51 PM


Glad you were both reborn, and doesn't the world seem better!!!  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-12-07 12:34 PM


Good to see you back, T!

DB

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-12-07 02:22 PM


Welcome back honey pie  

We all need our silence...
Yours has served you well...
This goes into my favorites of yours...


Jenny Lee


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
4 posted 1999-12-07 06:15 PM


Thanx DBM and Jen its great to be back though im still in a sort of a writers block state its all coming back.
And yes Isis the world does seem alot better,
well actually my life is better the world is still ineed of some repair.


 life is short kill quick



kari
Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA
5 posted 1999-12-07 09:57 PM


I am glad that everything is back on track for you.  I admire your ability to express your feelings in so many ways.  I also liked the format of the poem.
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