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Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 1999-12-06 03:48 PM


"Rain rain go away
Come again another day"
Why did it have to end this way?
She's gone, why I cannot say
And taken her light from my day. . .

Rain, rain please depart
And take your clouds from my heart
How can I make a brand new start?
I really hate this part
This is all I have left, my art.

Sun, sun come again
And make my love shine like then
The storm will end, but when?
Help me to see that this is not the end
And that my heart will find a brand new friend.

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-06 05:20 PM


Sven, Another beauty!!  I always SO enjoy reading your work, such beauty and longing always appeal.  Keep it up  
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 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 1999-12-07 12:55 PM


Wonderful poem Sven. But when love should come again it hope that it will shine brighter!  
Jaguar
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51
Quezon City, Philippines
3 posted 1999-12-07 07:13 AM


Beautiful one, Sven.

I understand that the Rain have left a lasting impression on your heart, it does to me..

..........

There is no more turning back this way
The path is overgrown and strewn with thorns
They've cast the lifeblood from your naked eyes
Cast aside to be forlorn

     -Sarah McLachlan

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