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Rain. . . (a third look)
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Rain. . . (a third look) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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The rain falls. And, as I sit here by my window Within these four walls, I begin to think of you. That used to be me. You were the only one I had ever loved. But now, I can't understand for the life of me How you could throw away that love. The rain falls. And, as I sit here by my window Within these four walls, I begin to think of you. And the tears flow down my face. How will I go on again Knowing I'll never see your face? The rain falls. And, as I sit here by my window Within these four walls, I begin to think of you. But my thoughts are taken away. And the voice behind me becomes real. And as the arms hold me again, My tears and the rain now no longer Fall for you. That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Beautiful and heartfelt. I always enjoy reading your work. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Like the rain huh? So do I  Another beauty Sven, always enjoyed  The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Jaguar Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51Quezon City, Philippines |
It seems that the rain touched your heart forever.. Nice going!, I wish I could as good as you.. Thanks for the poem. .......... There is no more turning back this way The path is overgrwon and strewn with thorns They've cast the lifeblood from your naked eyes Cast aside to be forlorn.. -Sarah McLachlan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes, I do like the rain. . .it washes the earth and the heart. . . Thank you all. .. That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
Very nicely done. I like the four walls that were depicted in the poem. Just know that tears are full of sorrow but every single one of them is getting the pain out of you... little by little. |
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