navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Unpretty
Dark Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic Unpretty Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Jaguar
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51
Quezon City, Philippines

0 posted 1999-12-05 05:38 AM


is how
I find
myself be
for you
will never
see
the beauty
of
me.

© Copyright 1999 Jaguar - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-05 06:27 PM


It's their loss Jaguar, their loss  

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 1999-12-06 08:26 AM


Jaguar,
       my beautiful friend. . . I do not need to see you to know that you are indeed a beautiful woman. . . like your namesake, you are indeed a being of pure and unmistakeable beauty. . .

Beautiful (but painful) words from a beautiful woman. . .



 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Terrina Kethryveris
Member
since 1999-12-06
Posts 53
USA
3 posted 1999-12-07 12:22 PM


'Tis ashame that most people don't realize that true beauty lies within. I must agree with Isis here if they do not see the beauty within it is their loss.  

Lovely poem, however sad it may be.

Terri


 Truth be known, fantasy is much more appealing than reality.

Ozzbat
New Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 9
Canada, Ontario
4 posted 1999-12-07 12:45 PM


So often we are inspired by a loss. Beatiful peice JAGUAR. Stay sweet, be true. Let hapiness seek you!

ps: I too, agree! Their loss... Here's to beter days @--->---

[This message has been edited by Ozzbat (edited 12-07-1999).]

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Unpretty

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary