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mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-12-04 04:29 PM


do you believe in magic,
or the power that it supposes.
a simple wave of the magic wand,
produces falsehood roses.

illusions made before the eye,
to tease the simple mind.
the hand is quicker than the eye,
the heart gets left behind.

are we all not magicians,
in some evil sorted way.
playing tricks on others souls,
their hearts we steal away.

me.

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-04 05:23 PM


Good question! I try to use my magic only for good

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 1999-12-14 01:32 PM


Wow mo! I don't know how i missed this one before. It is an interesting point of view. I really enjoyed this. But I would like to think there are good magicians and bad. Although I have only known the bad, if we all use use magic to steal or win the heart of another, I would like to think that mine is good. I've never been able to hurt the one I love the way he hurt me. Maybe the difference is the truths that lay behind the magic. Eighther the magic is pure illusion or it is the most simple beautiful form of magic, that of love.
But like I said that was a very interesting point of view. And as you can see it got me thinking. Sorry if I rambled on to much, and I really liked this poem!  

mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa
3 posted 1999-12-14 02:37 PM


thank you danni, i think you got the real meaning behind it. it is so easy to be subjected to magic good or evil. mo.
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 1999-12-14 02:40 PM


Life is full of decievers and believers, mojar...but I still think "true" majic lies out there for some hearts.  

Michael

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-12-15 06:53 PM


Mojar,
I liked this much....
I must say being a practioner of magick..I
do believe...there is magick all around us...
this had a magick all its own  

Jenny
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 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.




[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 12-15-1999).]

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