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Demon's Breath
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Demon's Breath |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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A Demon's breath whispers Across eternity Casting forgotten spells Of scarlet tides And ancient betrayal.... His eyes cold, black Piercing my soul Stripping my masks away Revealing A conquered warrior.... His magic rises Within the moonstreaked night A smothering cloud Choking out the heavens As I feel it's deadly touch.... I know he has won As the cloak begins to fall And the final darkness sets Over me And my eternal lands.... ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~ |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Casting forgotten spells  That's my fortay Seriously...this is awesome in great details. I could see his eyes cold and black. Brava! Jennifer ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
PLEASE visit and write for us more often! This my friend was magical... ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Great poem Krista, I loved this one. I love you're dark poems, I just wish you didn't always have the motivation. Thanks for posting this one, but you shoulda told me! I'm glad to have found it. ------------------ "Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If" |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~ |
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