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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-12-03 05:51 PM



You don't see them,
These crimes that you do,
Yet I am the judge and jury,
About to pass sentence on you.

But before I do,
I want you to know,
There are lessons to be learned,
About life, feelings and love I will bestow.

Take the time to see what's around you,
To partake in the beauty of this world,
Instead of sitting there critisizing,
Or what future you have will only be blurred.

Sometimes it's better to think with the heart,
Than thinking with your head,
For the head doesn't consider emotions,
Which should be your daily bread.

Weigh what you say,
Could it possibly hurt?
Don't pummel home your opinion,
It makes others feel like dirt.

Emotion, love, friendship and family,
That is what makes the world go round,
Not your opinion or thoughts alone,
They will just fall unheeded to the ground.

Open your heart,
Live through your soul,
Think of others,
You don't HAVE to be in control.

If you don't change,
I won't need to sentence you,
And I can even see your future,
Alone, unloved, bent in shame, no matter what you do.

The future I see for you,
Is dismal, dark and scary,
No joy, love, friendships or family,
Only making others wary.

I, Isis, Mother of all,
Wishes not to see this for you,
Open your heart and soul to the greater truth,
For there is nothing else left to do.

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-12-03 10:32 PM


Verse 4 was written for me....
Love your work Isis......
now give me more

Jennifer

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 12-03-1999).]

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-03 11:33 PM


Thanks Jen I'll see what I can do, a poem all about emotions being so important?? Stay tuned

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-12-05 06:19 PM


Jen, I gave you more in 'Emotions' is that what you had in mind?

 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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