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ambuman
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since 1999-11-26
Posts 8


0 posted 1999-12-03 05:06 PM


trying to see through viels of tears,
leaves me cold and lonely
i turn my up my collar,to face the night,
and cry for you only.

getting up at the dawn of day,
my boots are filled with tears.
a piece of me died last night,
the rest, today i fear.

i roll another cigarette,
and touch the end with flame.
the fire can feel my loneliness,
and whispers out your name.

an eagle soars up overhead,
as i sit up in the saddle.
i wish to be as free as he,
my heart continues to battle.

the horizon looms out in the distance,
forever to it i ride.
followed by a cloud of tears,
without you by my side.

to my angel


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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-03 06:07 PM


Beautiful just beautiful, loved the imagery too

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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