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armanca
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since 1999-07-07
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0 posted 1999-12-03 04:35 PM


Lucid Melancholy

Tears are not products of pain
they are merely instigators
Because tears are like windshield wiper fluid
Making the pain clearer.

© Copyright 1999 Carman - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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1 posted 1999-12-03 05:21 PM


Well done, short and simple, but speaks volumes and raises questions

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
2 posted 1999-12-03 09:37 PM


Isis...Do you think more should be added? Thank you for the response.

Carman

Isis
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3 posted 1999-12-03 11:56 PM


As it is it says enough I think, but you could digress and explain more about tears..
Personally it speaks enough for me

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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