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Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 1999-12-03 04:00 PM


The rain falls
And as I sit here by my window
Within these four walls
I begin to think of you

That used to be me
You were the only one I had ever loved
But now, how can I make you see
That she is my new love

The rain falls
And as I sit here by my window
Within these four walls
I begin to think of you
And the tears flow down my face
How can I make you understand
That she's taken your place

The rain falls
And as I sit here by my window
Withing these four walls
I hope you'll understand
That these words come from my heart
And that I'll never forget you
But the time has come, and we must part
But I think that I'll always love you.



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


© Copyright 1999 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 1999-12-04 02:04 AM


Boy, can i relate to this. It is a situation I have recently had to deal with. You explain it well.
Jaguar
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 51
Quezon City, Philippines
2 posted 1999-12-05 05:20 AM


It's your turn once again Sven, my friend, to drive a stake through my loveless heart. I can totally relate of how you feel deep inside your heart. Heart breakingly beautiful, you get more better by the minute.

..........

There is no more coming back this way
The path is overgrown and strewn with thorns
They've torn the lifeblood from your naked eyes
Cast aside to be forlorn..

-Sarah McLachlan

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