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lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

0 posted 1999-12-03 09:55 AM


I listen to the moon
It tells me the secrets
Of the night

I listen to the stars
It tells me there's going to
Be a heartache tonight

I listen to the song
It's singing the tales
Of the street

I listen to my soul
It tells me to never
Never accept defeat

On a quiet night
You can hear a heart break

© Copyright 1999 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-12-03 10:03 AM


Lostboy--
Yes...on a quiet night you can hear a heartbreak...perfect, lostboy, perfect!!!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 1999-12-03 10:23 AM


Very nice lostboy. My soul has told me the same, (that was my favorite part). Nice to see ya back. Missed you while you were gone.
lostboy
Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 1999-12-03 10:56 AM


star... glad you like it so much, hope all is well w/ you
danni...always welcome your feedback, thanks and missed you too!

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-12-03 12:47 PM


I too listen to the moon..... ....She has many a secret to share!

I always enjoy reading your work...such deep thoughts and heartfelt....enjoyed this jewel very much

Jennifer Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


lostboy
Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
5 posted 1999-12-03 01:04 PM


Thanks again Jen. The feeling is mutual. Yes indeed...many a secret!
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-12-03 05:41 PM


I always enjoy reading your work too, such heartfelt wanderings Welcome back

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
7 posted 1999-12-04 10:44 PM


Well now - this was quite unique! I liked it much! Thank you for sharing such a nice little piece! I too, love the moon....tis filled with magic !

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- - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do....- - pFF

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