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Dark Poetry #1

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Jaguar
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 51
Quezon City, Philippines

0 posted 1999-12-03 08:49 AM

Hands stained
with filth
of the flesh
that lay
before you
eyes flooded
in guilt
as you
deprived
souls
of
your grief.

........

There is no more coming back this way
The path is overgrown and strewn with thorns
They've torn the lifeblood from your naked eyes
Cast aside to be forlorn..

-Sarah McLachlan

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-12-03 10:07 AM

Jaguar:
These lines really touches me:
"as you deprieved souls of your grief"
i like, jaguar, i like!! keep em coming

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 1999-12-03 10:25 AM

Wow! Very powerful. I liked this one alot. Keep 'em coming!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 1999-12-04 01:09 PM

Jaguar. . . this is very beautiful. . . touching in it's despair, yet the glimmer always remains. . .

You do indeed speak from MY heart my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Jaguar
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 51
Quezon City, Philippines

4 posted 1999-12-05 05:09 AM

Hello Sven, danni and starboards

Thanks for your powerful and glimmmering words. It really brightened my day. Rest assured I'll keep it coming. Thanks again, friends.

There is no more coming back this way
The path is overgrown and strewn with thorns
They've torn the lifeblood from your naked eyes
Cast aside to be forlorn..

-Sarah McLachlan

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 1999-12-05 05:15 PM

There is such beauty in these words

The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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