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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-12-03 05:54 AM


She hurts me
As she leaves
Its another day
Of hurt of pain

She goes and
never is seen
Just another day
alone in my room

No love remains
deep in her
Another day moves
As I stand in the rain

I am so old
Now without her
As many days go
And I don't see her

It's over now
Forever
Too many days gone
And I live no longer

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
lostboy
Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 1999-12-03 09:50 AM


Sad poem Walter. I felt this before, ya got to keep the faith kiddo! Nothing's over 'till the Man says it's over! Look up and ahead!
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 1999-12-03 10:04 AM


Poe--
This poem reminds me of when my boyfriend broke up w/me...it was raining and i just stared up at the sky for help as the rain poured down...i like this one poe, it hit the heart, ouch!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

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