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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-12-02 12:48 PM


I saw her
that woman
all woman
her smell
sweet nature
her flow
she moves
leg on leg
heart sears
enters me
as i sleep
Her eyes
dig deep
my angel
unrequited
soulmate
lover
burn me
don't talk
don't see
i'm here
come to me
stay away
I am loves slave
I am loves Fool


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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-12-02 01:05 PM


I too am loves slave and ultimatly her fool!

A heartfelt read for me Walter !!

Jennifer

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 1999-12-02 09:53 PM


"i am loves slave,
i am loves fool."

I'm loving it, poe!! describes me and my situation...great job once again

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

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