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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-12-02 12:29 PM


All the future
closes in
Fills your lungs
trappin you down
race the past
keep ahead
or get sucked back
Dread Dread
Untimely death
start your descent
read your past
As all charades end
And crash and bend
Dread Dread
On your way we send
No remains
Only disdain
of the past
left behind
In shadows
And in Gray
Dread Dread
In the future
Your dead
You are just shadows
The futures revenge


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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-02 05:53 PM


Dark and forebiding me likes

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
2 posted 1999-12-02 06:39 PM


That is very good. I like it a lot!
-Neala
(Goddesses of Sadness)

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-12-02 07:30 PM


I really like Walter...the last two lines are my favorite

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



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