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Sven
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0 posted 1999-12-01 03:44 PM


Weep not for what is not my friend
The love that cannot be yours. . .
For it belongs to another and in the end
Your pain will only be yours. . .

Your love is not in that place
And may never well be
Your true love is in the face
That only the mirror can see

The love you have inside dear one
May still be for one alone
But with the rising of each new sun
I can see how much you've grown.

Your love may never come my dear
And there will be tears that you cry
I know it's not what you want to hear
But you will get by.

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


© Copyright 1999 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 1999-12-01 04:32 PM


Words of wisdom Sven, well done

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Jewl_24_1999
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since 1999-10-24
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2 posted 1999-12-01 11:10 PM


Wonderful Sven!
Deverone
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Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
3 posted 1999-12-02 03:25 AM


VERY NICELY DONE.....
as Isis said "Words of wisdom"

Beautifully put.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



Jaguar
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since 1999-11-27
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4 posted 1999-12-02 04:30 AM


Beautiful, beautiful and beautiful!
Sven
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5 posted 1999-12-02 11:00 AM


Thank you my friends. . .

Your words are very encouraging. . .

Thank you

Sven

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
6 posted 1999-12-02 06:23 PM


This poem would be one for my ex to read. Describes him and how he feels now perfectly. It was a great read. Keep up the good work.
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