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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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I have no muse, I have no light, Only darkness and fear, Please turn off the light. No one in which to fully confide, Some thoughts I wouldn't dare share, They should stay down and hide, They'd only scare. Seems I'm destined to be misunderstood, On the rack, they turn the wheels, Putrid, swamp I know thee well, This is my own personal hell. The heart filled with love to bursting, Now often is left thirsting, Inadequacies shadow me, Perhaps this is my destiny. No total peace or total soul, A limited being lacking control, Losing ground, cannot face, Another conjecture in this spinning space. Craving for such understanding, The gift of unrelenting love and peace, Knowing I'm understood would be good, Then these bile filled thoughts would cease. ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
A limited being lacking control... Lisa, I shudder for what you face daily, and with so much spirit. DB |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"Destined to be misunderstood"...truly a feeling I share with you. Deeply dark, Isis, very well done. Michael |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
Personally I like the last stanza... Many a time we all just wish we oculd just be understood.... GREAT JOB ONCE AGAIN Isis!! ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You know my friend...some where there is someone who is willing to take the time to understand. That is the key you know, Sister. Someone that truely cares and will take the time to truely listen. Well written and very dark indeed. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
"Inadequices shadow me, Perhaps this is my destiny." Isis...once again..great job! starboards |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone, I quite liked this one myself!!  DB Thanks hon. Michael, it's sad but I do feel that way  Deverone, Marilyn and Starboards thanks ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Isis...while this is indeed dark and brooding......I think we are all left thirsting for things that seem unattainable. Persevere Warrior Princess...you have enough love to share with many. Just my humble opinon Jennifer Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks for the uplifting words Jenny You've lighted today for me  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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