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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-11-30 09:53 AM


My god ignores me
My family dies
My Prayers unheard

My Legs are scarred
My belief is tainted
My prayers are ignored

My heart is weak
My pain unending
My Relief death

Lonely
Alone
And god ignores me

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-30 01:53 PM


Your work here screams desolation..........
.....well done.


Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 1999-11-30 10:12 PM


i like this one because it is somehow chilling to think about...sometimes our prayers are unanswered...hmmmm...makes me think...

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
3 posted 1999-12-03 02:57 PM


I take it you aren't one of those people who believe that everything happens for a reason.

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JOY


lostboy
Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 1999-12-03 03:02 PM


Makes me think think too, not neccessarily that sometimes prayers go unanswered, but that sometimes, the answer is ....no
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-12-03 06:17 PM


I agree with LostBoy, sometimes the answer is NO, whether we like it or not, whether we understand it or not. A thought, if we got EVERYTHING we wanted we wouldn't be the people we are today. Pain and heartache are great teachers my friend

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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