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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 1999-11-29 02:53 PM


Anger
Rushing in
Pulsing in my head
Anger like a wild river
Un-controlable
Crashing waves hit rocks
Like my anger hits my victims
With a menacing shout
My short harsh words will drive you out
My anger
Can't be controlled today
It just can't be controlled

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JOY

-Don't go around saying the world owes you a living; the world owes you nothing; it was here first.
-Mark Twain

© Copyright 1999 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
lostboy
Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 1999-11-29 03:13 PM


That's a cool description of anger, waves crashing on the rocks. Man, there's no controlling that!! Nicely worded Joy.
Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-29 03:37 PM


As one who has bounced down a river w/o the benefit of a boat, I must say anger likened to that is frightening indeed.

DB

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-11-29 05:51 PM


Well described indeed!! Sometimes you've just gotta be angry and nothing will coax you out of it!!

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
5 posted 1999-11-30 01:18 AM


I agree with the others, well done indeed. Boy do I know those days as well!
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
6 posted 1999-11-30 06:16 PM


Anger and Rage can't be quite a rush, indeed. You grasp this well.

michael

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