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Our Beginning |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
For months we talked, laughed and cried, You lost your heart and I gave you mine. The time came when we had to meet, This was for real, we were in so deep. The day came, the hour, the place, I knew it was real when I saw your face. You smiled and lit up my whole world, I knew right then, you were my girl. After hours of thinking, talking, and getting to know, You had my heart, body and soul and it did glow. Our first day together and we both knew, This love we found was a dream come true. Your touch alone just made me melt, I knew this was something we both felt. And the night you came back to say, 'you forgot to tell me....you loved me, by the way.' Then we sealed it with our first kiss, I felt your heartbeat next to mine, with that kiss, Our bodies blended and meshed into one, As we felt the love between us had begun. The passion between us was just so strong, that no matter what, we knew it wasn't wrong. Like two little kids wiht a secret to share, We were so happy that we just didn't care. And now that our lives are one, There is nothing we can't do as one. You see, we match so well, I only hope it stays this way, We can be really be together, forever to stay. [This message has been edited by eegood (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too hope it will stay that way for you Eegood! Something so precious should be treasured  Lovely piece ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Filled with pure LOVE I enjoyed reading this very much! Jennifer Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"forever, to stay" says it all. Felt the need behind this one, good job. Michael |
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