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danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-29 01:49 AM


This is just a little something that popped into my head and couln't get rid off. So hope you enjoy my little piece of food for thought!


Never trust the ones
who claim they have
the world to give
For they are surely fools
who believe the world
is theirs to give
Instead, place your trust
in the ones who are willing
to give of themselves
For that is the gift
more worth receiving.

© Copyright 1999 Dannielle - All Rights Reserved
Stevia
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 28

1 posted 1999-11-29 03:57 AM


Thoughts like this should pop into your head every day.How true , we tend to trust the wrong people. Nice Danni.
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-11-29 04:53 AM


Some pretty substancial food there, danni. I could use a little more of this type of nourishment. Very well done.

michael

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 1999-11-29 11:26 AM


Very good Danni

Too many times do we promise the world
and fail to deliver
When all that we should promise is ourselves
for nothing shines like a giver. . .

Sven

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 1999-11-29 11:51 AM


Thank you-Stevia and Micheal-I wish i would have thought of this 4 years earlier
It would have saved me a whole lot of disappoinment and heartache
Sven-How right you are. Thank you.

lostboy
Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
5 posted 1999-11-29 02:41 PM


This is food I really ate up! danni, I always believe or want to anyway that whatever we go through, as much as it s****, where we are now is exactly where we're supposed to be. Does that make sense?
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-11-29 06:02 PM


I'll top that with the comment 'trust has to be earned!' Well done Danni, we usually do put our trust in the wrong people

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
7 posted 1999-11-30 01:11 AM


Lostboy- it makes perfect sense and I agree with you. Thanks again!
Isis- you are absolutely right. Thank you.

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