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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-27 07:51 PM


Hear the screams of terror ringing?
sounds of death and demons singing?

Darkness creeps across the land
leading weary by the hand

Quiet, as I stop your heart...
shortly from life you shall depart

Feel the coolness of my blade?
slowly stopping "lifes' parade"

I hush you as I push it in...
fear and pain now to begin

Silent agony your only friend
caressing your hand untill the end

Fear enchants you as you slip away
embracing your nightmare, within it you stay

Forever you wondered, how would my life end?
your "play" is now written, care to attend?

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be


[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 11-27-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 1999-11-27 09:16 PM


Very good.

Powerful to the extreme
When of death is what you speak

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-27 10:20 PM


Not a play I'd particularly like to see, but great poem nonetheless

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
3 posted 1999-11-27 11:02 PM


JOY 14... Thank you kindly
Isis... Probably not one any of us would particularly like to see LOL But, after all, this IS Dark Passions, right? LOL

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-11-27 11:11 PM


LOL spot on TK

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
5 posted 1999-11-28 01:07 AM


Definatley an incredibly dark poem, but none the less enthrawling. Well done!
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
6 posted 1999-11-29 04:03 AM


Awesome piece....loved the final stanza.

michael

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
7 posted 1999-12-01 06:44 PM


danni... Thank you
Michael... Thank you

Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
8 posted 1999-12-01 07:34 PM


I echo Michael...Excellently written, my friend.
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