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Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 1999-11-27 06:24 PM

I look at my life
I realize your holdin it togather
As I lay in your arms
As a lost soul
You care about me
Even though you don't understand
As you want to
I have choosen a life
That you don't agree with
But you go along with it
Although we feel such passion for each other
I have a desire for you
Abundent need
That I have need felt before
That feels me with thoughts and ideas
That feel wonderful

Jaguar
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 51
Quezon City, Philippines

1 posted 1999-11-27 11:39 PM

You poem reminds me a lot of my friend, Mary who has been through a lot of tough times with her boyfriend Michael.Anyway, it's reall cool and great.

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

2 posted 1999-11-28 03:49 PM

Keep these pieces coming.
I have found this to be great therapy for myself. I've been able to finally answer a lot of my own questions, by dropping them in here.
Nice work
-RS

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There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-11-29 04:26 AM

Great piece...I'm right there with FreeByrd. I have found this forum to be quite theraputic. Hope to see more from you soon.

michael

Stevia
Junior Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 28

4 posted 1999-12-01 05:02 AM

I'm right there too.I have chosen a life that he doesn't agree too. So much desire still.Thanks .

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 1999-12-02 12:20 PM

Theraputic is right, whichever way you exorcise your demons, express yourself and we benefit from it too!! Keep 'em coming

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Deverone
Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

6 posted 1999-12-02 03:29 AM

I agree with all here...this is the best thing I have found to freely express myself..... very helpful and sometimes without realizing it;..it is pretty insightful from others and from myself. Looking forward to seeing more from you.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---

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