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Dark Poetry #1

Cries from the Abyss

BoyToy
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
everett, wa, usa

0 posted 1999-11-27 04:13 PM

Listen sweetness, hear the noise?
Listen closer, let your innocence aside.
Those are them, the ones who suffer,
feel the heat and smell the sulphur.

Look down into the red glow,
open your eyes and let them go.
Can you see the torment? can you feel the terror? Look! that one gnashes teeth and pulls hair.

Pretty crazy if you ask me. Hey, are you alright? Never fear sweetness, why you dont think you could end up in this plight?

I'm laughing as I watch that man burn again and again, or look at the drug whore, forced to continually beg for more and more.

Over here we have the deviants, the ones who had to touch.The images of young wonderful flesh, just out of reach, 'course having hands would help.

LOOK! Those are the disbelievers, to bad about there ears and eyes, at least they cant watch their souls die.

Now don't step closer to the edge my dear, you may fall. I have it on good word your name might get called. So run from here now, and pray you never return. Im going back down to see what more I can learn.

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A dark, black past is my most valued possession...D. Mustaine

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-27 05:01 PM

The gates of Hades, I like this a lot, wanted more!!

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 1999-11-28 11:48 AM

You have captured a most terrifying darkness.
Nice work!

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